Thursday, October 16, 2008

Sunset Bids

Craddle
by Akiss

I miss my baby, I miss his love,
I miss his arms around me at night,
I miss his hugs, I miss his kisses,
I miss everything that my baby gives.

When she was gone you are with me,
And now she's coping and you are away,
When will you be back into my side,
Baby I'm waiting for you to lay.

You said you don't want us to break,
You said you don't want me to be hurt,
I believe on every word you have said,
I find ways and find some efforts.

I want you here beside me again,
My heart finds you and drop a tear,
Thinkin' that you'll be back to make and end,
My baby just stop it and say you'll stay.

Just transferring my day's off date,
Insanely done to be with you longer,
But how could you ignore the plan?
You haven't realized how it's done?

I broke up with you 'cause I am hurt,
I can't bear a pain of a concubine,
We are the second apple of the eye,
So let's stop this cruelty and lies.

I want to stay but say you'll value me,
Just make some efforts and I will risk,
We both have main to gain some pain,
But keep on loving and we will remain.

8 comments:

dÖLL said...

Nice piece Ma'am. Some of the lines maka relate ko.. ehehe

It's very tyrannical to play the role of being a concubine of the one you love. Char=))

Anonymous said...

aw. atay! hahaha! Tyrannical jud ang term..y mn ka ka relate?!

Anonymous said...

kahilak man pud ta sa term na trynnical oi... ug concubine.. heheh... stud na nimo si dahlchie mam?? hehehe.. hadlok kaau ug mga terms bah... hehehe

Anonymous said...

nyahaha! yup..wahhh! kinsa di ka? :-)

Anonymous said...

hahaha.... nICE poEM!??! para kaniNO?! swErte pO naMN nYa!! haha... pRO cnayaNG lng!?!...
gUd luCK 2 hiM!...hMP!...

Anonymous said...

awtz! tnx sa coment! im not xur if i know u bt tnx sa coment. cnayang nga..like d trust i hav given was wasted. He is swerte?! gud thing for him if he felt it dat way but im so unlucky!! well, yeah good luck to him indeed! :-)

Anonymous said...

panget xa..';...;'.....>.<..haha..joke

Anonymous said...

ha?! kinsa nsad ka?! hahaiz!